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Hi there. My name is Dorothy and i'm a girl. 1st July is the day I saw the first sign of life throughout all these years. I'm just another somebody. I love chocolates and cookies, heart simplicity and have a passion for soft colours. I like to sing, except for the fact that my voice sounds suck-ish. I do web-designs, graphics and etc during my leisure. I'm learning two things i've considered most important in my life: To love, and not to hate.
So love you if you love me(:
I'm in love with my awesome friends. I ain't perfect but I'm unique, so live with it.

Lastly, a tag is greatly appreciated. Ma vie, mon amour.
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date: Tuesday, 18 October 2011
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1. REVISED SCRIPT TEMPLATE CAN BE DOWNLOADED FROM https://sites.google.com/site/nafawrites/downloads

- part1 - cover page with name/student no/class/subject,
story title, 1-sentence summary (1pg for part1)
- part2 - 1 sentence summary (yes, again) & story synopsis (1pg)
- part3 - 3 act structure (1pg)
- character Bio (half to 1pg)
- part4 - script - final draft (max 5 pages)
- part5 - (OPTIONAL) any notes, sketches, beats/treatment, etc

name/student no/class/subject on every page - see template.

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Stories
1 - Student's own story
2 - Use a location in your story
3 - Use an item in your story
4 - Non-human key character, eg animal, objects, etc
5 - 2 Key Characters with 1 motive (& they don't like each other)

general feedback on your stories/scripts:
- work out the 3-Act-Structure & Character Bio (point form/relevant info)
- work out treatment (point form/write AV, as u see/hear the show)
- at least script draft1 should be ready by next week
- for those with scripts, work on editing (make every word count)

those who are unsure of your story:
- discuss with your classmates,
- ask them for help & constructive comments.
- u don't have to follow any comments or suggestions
- try to see your story from another point of view.
- ask questions about your stories & character's behaviours/reactions to tighten the loose ends

on your scripts:
- no offense, but be cruel about cutting off words/dialogue that do not work for your story
- test: if u take out the phrases/words and it doesn't change your story, REMOVE.
- write info necessary for your story
- every word in your script counts & must be there for your story to work
- for improving on dialogue, rewrite/edit - say it better - keep it short, keep it easy to understand
- ask your classmates to help do a "script read", use voices to "act" your script out, see if the script/dialogue work when read